At this point I had a basic edit made, with the 3 scenes together and the scenes colour corrected so that they all matched. Sharon watched through the edit and gave me some really helpful tips.
-to search for sound as soon as possible
-to look into type for the title and how i could create this, whether this is handmade or digital
-to add transitions and text
-to make sure that things run smoothly
lastly we discussed the final scene, it was easily the weakest of all, a majority of the things included in the scene were black and just merged together it was also confusing and badly shot. It seemed that the best thing overall for the film would be to go back and refilm this scene which meant going and remaking a few elements of the scene, e.g. the characters, the watering can, the clothes, the clothes line.